At the bottom of the review, you need to write a disclosure whether you received the toy for free or bought it yourself. This is important in regards to the laws of advertising.
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Product Reviews Part One ~ Sex Toy Action
You also need to show the toy in its relative size. Most websites show measurements nowadays, but seeing the toy compared to something you know, can say a lot more. I always take pictures with the toy in my hand
Writing vs Editing, Different Hats, Different Persona
Write creatively and freely, then edit critically and dispassionately. Format and embellish for readability. Brand and promote for findability.